Is this cute ?

i think the lack of contrast and illegibility makes it a lacking design. some recs —

• try gaussian blurring the background for the top one
• make the eye graphic smaller (it’s really good and nice) so that it doesn’t get covered with the text, making it hard to read.
• making the black softer would be better
• the entire graphic and text are both dark. try making the text a lighter shade of red, or making the black softer

yes but i think you should make the grays and blacks fainter so that it contrasts with the text more. also use icons with similar line thicknesses?

depends on the impression you want to give really. what’s the image you’d like to present